"A Change of Heart"
This is a different type of post. This is the script to a short film that my friend, Dan ( http://criterionmaster.blogspot.com ) and I are doing. We won't be shooting it until next winter (It requires snow), but if you want to read it, PLEASE leave any comments or critisism. I like it. It is quite short. (The short won't be very long; two minutes, tops.) Please read it. Sorry if the formatting is messed up. I copied and pasted it from my word file. Thanks.
SCENE ONE
A SNOWY STREET EXT LATE DAY
SCENE ONE
A SNOWY STREET EXT LATE DAY
1 It’s about six o’clock, standard time. A young man limps down the street, bleeding.
2 Blood covers the snow and his face. He falls, face up into the snow.
NARRARATOR
3 How did I get here? I can’t imagine ever feeling more pain.
SCENE TWO
A DARK ALLEY EXT LATE DAY
NARRARATOR
4 I was walking home from the store.
2 Blood covers the snow and his face. He falls, face up into the snow.
NARRARATOR
3 How did I get here? I can’t imagine ever feeling more pain.
SCENE TWO
A DARK ALLEY EXT LATE DAY
NARRARATOR
4 I was walking home from the store.
5 The young man walks into an alley to get to his street.
NARRARATOR
6 Suddenly, I run into a couple of hard-ass kids, who resume to beat the shit out of me.
7 The two kids beat the young man with baseball bats and stick him with pocket knives.
8 The two punks run off, and the young man limps out onto his street.
SCENE THREE
A SNOWY STREET EXT LATE DAY
9 The young man is laying on the ground. Blood seeps quickly through the snow.
NARRARATOR
10 That about brings us up to speed, doesn’t it?
11 A pair of hands grab the young man.
ANONYMOUS MAN
12 Do you live around here?
13 The young man points to a large house.
14 The young man is taken inside.
SCENE FOUR
THE YOUNG MAN’S HOUSE INT NIGHT
15 The young man is bandaged up and lied out in a recliner chair.
16 The anonymous man looks over the young man.
17 When the young man can make out the identity of the anonymous man, he sees that it is one of his attackers.
YOUNG MAN
18 Why are you doing this?
ANONYMOUS MAN
19 I don’t know. Change of heart?
20 The anonymous man walks out of the room.
21 The screen fades to black.
NARRARATOR
22 I never thanked that guy. It said on the news the next morning he was gunned down. I guess I never will.
NARRARATOR
6 Suddenly, I run into a couple of hard-ass kids, who resume to beat the shit out of me.
7 The two kids beat the young man with baseball bats and stick him with pocket knives.
8 The two punks run off, and the young man limps out onto his street.
SCENE THREE
A SNOWY STREET EXT LATE DAY
9 The young man is laying on the ground. Blood seeps quickly through the snow.
NARRARATOR
10 That about brings us up to speed, doesn’t it?
11 A pair of hands grab the young man.
ANONYMOUS MAN
12 Do you live around here?
13 The young man points to a large house.
14 The young man is taken inside.
SCENE FOUR
THE YOUNG MAN’S HOUSE INT NIGHT
15 The young man is bandaged up and lied out in a recliner chair.
16 The anonymous man looks over the young man.
17 When the young man can make out the identity of the anonymous man, he sees that it is one of his attackers.
YOUNG MAN
18 Why are you doing this?
ANONYMOUS MAN
19 I don’t know. Change of heart?
20 The anonymous man walks out of the room.
21 The screen fades to black.
NARRARATOR
22 I never thanked that guy. It said on the news the next morning he was gunned down. I guess I never will.
THE END






